3 SENTENCES

I started to read : Agile Writer: Method

You can find it here: https://amzn.to/4snE6qN

In the first three sentences of your story, on page one, you must create a question in the reader’s mind that will encourage them to read on. Answer these three questions:

(1) Where am I?

(2) Whose Head am I in?

(3) What has changed or may change?

Eva was in her bedroom (1 e 2) , she a young woman with 19 years with long black hair and violet eyes was reading the book that she read religiously every weekend: her mother'book of chess./ The begning of Eva's life on earth caused the death of her mother Suzanne./ Eva knew somehow, deep in her mind, why that had to happen...(3)  

You can see on my OVERSHARING post that it got much better this way.