GABRIEL BRENDLER

👽 Im reewriting the story. The first version was getting nowhere and was, in reality, very boring. I wrote 6 pages in two hours. While I had writen in four days 10 pages of the first version. The draft is going to be fire!  Besides I was writing in QuollWritter. It is very good, but LibreOffice is better - expecially configuring to all black.💀 👹 I will not post parts of the text, I start to worry about possible copycats.

I started to read : Agile Writer: Method You can find it here:  https://amzn.to/4snE6qN In the first three sentences of your story, on page one, you  must create a question in the reader’s mind that will encourage  them to read on. Answer these three questions: (1) Where am I? (2) Whose Head am I in? (3) What has changed or may change? Eva was in her bedroom (1 e 2) , she a young woman with 19 years with long black hair and violet eyes was reading the book that she read religiously every weekend: her mother'book of chess./ The begning of Eva's life on earth caused the death of her mother Suzanne./ Eva knew somehow, deep in her mind, why that had to happen...(3)   You can see on my  OVERSHARING  post that it got much better this way. 

Oversharing my first paragraphs (full of errors):  I started the story with Eva, she will be the mother Benjamyn, the protagonist... I will try to not post more content about this first draft (I actually think these paragrsphs to be the weakeast ones)... I will wait for the following revisions to be more confident. 

I want to show some exercises from a ver very old (1800) book Im using to get better at Writing fiction. Maybe someday I'll show my responses, but in this section they are to personal...  * * * * That's all. The book has has exercises for each part that a story has to contain. I will post more along the time. There are exercises less personals (I will do them, and post my answers here... Dont now when. 

I reestarted 😛: (11/04) = 1982 words  (12/04) =  

I did the covers using the Copilot from Microsoft. I know I should't think about covers when the book is not even finished yet. But, well, it was fun. Needles to say that, im my defense, as you may see bellow, the design was my idea. Im still learning how to add images. Maybe I will not going to use anyone, but they are cool anyway.